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PostSubject: kurai taiyou   kurai taiyou EmptySun Mar 28, 2010 9:56 am

Name: kurai taiyou

History:the group was started after the fourth great shinobi war was going on they were made to protect the villages kumo mostly it was started by a uchiha that had some how lived after the war was over they decided to stay around to help all villages the main base was in kumo they try to find and protect good jinchuriki and evil as well so that the akatsuki dosent get them for the plan for world domanation [sp?] each member had a dark katana with a piece of the demons power traped with in the strongist haveing the nine tailed foxes and the weakist haveing the shakakus they want to protect every village out there so the members could spread as far as mist to kumo to konoha and so on and so forth each member has a certin tatto the leader haveing the jashin symbol on the chest and bat wings on the back

Members: (1/9) i'm the leader

Symbols: Tatto
Leader:Jashin symbol on chest and bat wings on back
Second in command:Demon face on arm
Member:Flames of hell on back
Member:Oni snake going around the arm
Member:Scar going down right eye
Member:Gates of heaven on chest
Member:Spear on leg
Member:The word hell on right arm
Member:The word heaven on left arm

Special Items:A dark katana for each


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PostSubject: Re: kurai taiyou   kurai taiyou EmptySun Mar 28, 2010 2:31 pm

Well i like the concept, but you didnt say what they are after and if they are evil or good.
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PostSubject: Re: kurai taiyou   kurai taiyou EmptySun Mar 28, 2010 3:24 pm

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PostSubject: Re: kurai taiyou   kurai taiyou EmptySun Mar 28, 2010 3:59 pm

Still wont except it! Go look at Takumi and see how my history is! You cant just make where they are and who is leading the group.And you put if they are good in history
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PostSubject: Re: kurai taiyou   kurai taiyou EmptySun Mar 28, 2010 4:30 pm

I see nothing wrong with it, however, i do have a suggestion.

Instead of having random markings, make each marking have something to do with the Bijuu its self. Like for instance:

Shukaku - Gourd(sp?)
Nibi - Fangs
Hachibi - Horns
Kyuubi - Whiskers

Make the tattoos symbolic to they're sword.
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